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Writer's note: A Part Two, easier to read, is archived August 2015.
This Part One is largely for my fellow science fiction "nerds" who, by definition, may be lacking social skills and in their own bubble, a bubble that becomes horribly visible when they arrive late.
Writer's note: A Part Two, easier to read, is archived August 2015.
This Part One is largely for my fellow science fiction "nerds" who, by definition, may be lacking social skills and in their own bubble, a bubble that becomes horribly visible when they arrive late.
Writer’s Seminars:
How to Contribute
Introduction
Sometimes enthusiastic writers
get together to learn from experts and each other. This can be at places as
diverse as a bookstore, community centre, or a hotel convention space. You will find that a writer’s seminar, workshop, panel discussion or coffee klatch… may be taught by
one teacher or led by a chairman or a panel of experts at the front of the
room. The crowd may be small or big. The chairs maybe set up classroom style,
or in a circle, or around a table. Always there is time set aside for audience
participation.
While it can be scary to contribute in a big group, it can help your confidence to be aware of a few things.
While it can be scary to contribute in a big group, it can help your confidence to be aware of a few things.
Awareness allows choice
As writers,
especially when we do a nonfiction piece, especially an essay, it is important
to be aware of the length of our average paragraph, because if you have
something you wish to emphasize, then you can signal this emphasis to the
reader by making a paragraph much longer or shorter than the average. The
paragraph will stand out.
At a writer’s
seminar, when people are contributing comments, it is important to become aware
of the length of the average comment you are hearing, because if you have a
comment longer than average it will be emphasized, and people will think it is
important, important enough for you to take extra time to speak. If you enter a
seminar late, then it’s best to take the time to listen and gain awareness of
the average contribution-length, so you do not emphasize by accident. With
awareness you may emphasize by choice.
Length is Related to Energy and Pacing
There is a story I
found in a magazine article on communication. A man wanted to get a laugh, so
he found a very good joke by the famous comedian, Bob Hope. Then he waited for
his chance. One day, he was standing with some people and, after a few people
had told jokes, and the group was laughing, he contributed his Bob Hope one—No laughter! The joke just
plopped, fell flat. Why? What happened was: He had not been
aware of how all the other jokes were short with fast energy. His contribution
was not funny because, being long and s-s-l-l-o-o-w-w, it did not match. (Although it had matched Bob Hope's set of jokes)
Needless to say, a happy gathering of intellectual writers may talk in long thoughtful paragraphs with each other. I can appreciate that.
Meanwhile, if my fellow writers are getting really excited about popular
culture, or Star Trek television
writing, and making their contributions short and energetic, then while I may not
share their excitement and energy, I find that if I can be equally short it
will be OK for them.
If I enter a seminar room late then I will listen, taking time
to raise my group awareness, before I contribute.
A Large Group is like a Radio Net:
Think Before You Speak
As you know, the
radio call sign for the Calgary International Airport is YCC. There is only one
airport. In contrast, an army battalion of 450 men may have scores of call
signs, all on the same radio frequency, where only one person may talk at a
time. How do they handle all that radio traffic? Easy: It does not take very
long to learn to follow the slogan “Think Before You Speak.”
Soldiers, glorious and proud, are advised it is OK to humbly write out what you need to say on a piece
of paper, if that is what you need to do, before you start to transmit. (I will mentally rehearse) Another skill for soldiers, and for civilians too, is learning to be brief and
concise. Like learning to take notes in college. We civilians may learn how to leave someone
a brief phone message, or a brief e-mail. Once you are aware of the
need to be concise, you quickly get the hang of it. It's fun.
Soldiers are taught how, before they press the button on the transceiver, they should think of the acronym BASS, standing for Brevity, Accuracy, Speed and military Security. I guess for us civilians "Security" could mean considering: Would any absent person's feelings be hurt if they were present and listening? The whole group benefits when we show r-e-s-p-e-c-t.
Soldiers are taught how, before they press the button on the transceiver, they should think of the acronym BASS, standing for Brevity, Accuracy, Speed and military Security. I guess for us civilians "Security" could mean considering: Would any absent person's feelings be hurt if they were present and listening? The whole group benefits when we show r-e-s-p-e-c-t.
At a writer’s
seminar there may be scores of people in the room; it can be
scary to contribute in such a big group. Remember to breath, and “think
before you speak.”
Sean Crawford
July
Calgary
2015
Footnote:
I dug this up because I am not writing new essays just now; my attention is on my manuscript which is close to deadline.
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